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The bar chart shows the number of overseas visitors to Australia for the purpose of holiday from four different countries in 2019.Overall, Australian holiday destinations were most popular among visitors from China, with almost two million visitors. The USA closely followed, with around 1.5 million visitors, while Japan and the UK had comparatively low numbers of holiday visitors.In more detail, China had the highest number of holiday visitors, with almost double the amount of the USA. During 2019, close to two million Chinese visitors travelled to Australia for a holiday. The USA was the second leading source of holiday visitors to Australia, with approximately 1.5 million visitors. Japan had about half the number of holiday visitors as the USA, with around 800,000 visitors. The UK had the lowest number of holiday visitors, with just over half a million.In conclusion, the bar chart suggests the popularity of Australia as a holiday destination for tourists from China and the USA as they contributed the highest number of holiday visitors to Australia. By contrast, Japan and the UK had lower numbers of holiday visitors, indicating that Australia may need to focus on promoting itself as a holiday destination to these countries.